Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing on behalf of the students at Tipton College
One the one hand, the first problem is the lack of materials
such as maps, textbooks, video projectors, etc. The students might feel
motivated to learn better and with more pleasure if our school were provided
with such compulsory materials. I suggest as a solution to this problem to
introduce some fund raising activities in our college. These activities might
include plays, dance shows, fairs on different themes, etc. as a modality to
raise money. This could also make our school more self-sufficient and it is an
original manner to discover new talents among our students.
An another way of raising money for improving the facilities
of our school is to charge a small fee for each student for every year. My
opinion is that they should be conscious that if they want a better environment
to learn into, they have to participate both to activities and to donating
money to the school’s fund.
On the other hand, more and more students from our school
tend to skip classes, mostly because they are getting bored and believe that
the classes they are attending to are not interesting at all. They also
consider the fact that there is nothing that could make them pay attention to
the classes. One solution would be to have some security guards standing at all
the doors of the school checking whether the students intent to skip their
courses and to stop them from doing this. However, this cannot be possible
without the government’s help as paying the security guars is beyond our
possibilities.
I hope that my suggestions will be taken into consideration
and that our situation will improve without being necessary to close our
school. Thank you in anticipation!
Yours
faithfully,
Olivia
Connor
Sorry, I forgot I had to write an essay:)
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